By Ryan Ngo
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Link to Peer Edit & Rough Draft
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jMjSPWIqGqXUOSWBwpKHLrghXhlhodkXT3rVMJQ3i90/edit?usp=sharing
Reflection
By crafting such masterpiece, I had mastered the art of descriptive writing. During the writing process, I learned about various literary devices, such as metaphors, passive voices, I can implement to describe food. I gained mastery over such literary techniques through my analysis of professional food articles. It was certainly a rewarding experience to design such review, for I had gave my writing skills a great boost.
First of all, I appreciate that you didn’t sugarcoat anything when talking about the starter, it’s very important to be…
I really liked how you tied everything together. You showed your three points nd executed them nicely, even if one…
Your explanation of the parallels and the irony of the scene is very elaborate and shows the author’s intentions well.…
I think that this restaurant review was pretty cool, especially how you started off the poster with where its located…
Hi Ryan, I really liked the adjectives you used to describe your food and it made me want to eat…
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Hi Ryan, I really liked the adjectives you used to describe your food and it made me want to eat it too. Your homepage was kind of confusing and I had trouble trying to read which essay is which, so I think you should use tabs to make it neater and easier for your readers to see. Other than that, I think you did a good job on this assignment. Good job!
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I think that this restaurant review was pretty cool, especially how you started off the poster with where its located and some basic information. Throughout your review, I really liked how you described each word, as they were used with strong word choice that allowed the reader to understand what the food tasted like. You were very honest with your review, which is a good thing. Good job!
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First of all, I appreciate that you didn’t sugarcoat anything when talking about the starter, it’s very important to be honest about how good it is as it’s important for someone who wants to go there and eat. I liked the descriptive words that you used, but the poster is quite difficult to see. Nicely done overall
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